I used to think designing e-commerce emails was all about flashy images and bold fonts.
So I spent way too much time adding product mockups, banners, even GIFs… and then crossed my fingers hoping they’d convert.
Spoiler alert: they didn’t.
Turns out, good-looking emails don’t always sell. What really converts? Clear strategy, smart structure, and user-focused design. Once I stopped designing for looks and started designing for behavior, my abandoned cart recovery rate tripled. Literally. It went from a sad 4% to almost 13% just by changing how I structured the emails.
So, if you’re trying to figure out how to create e-commerce emails that actually get clicks and bring in revenue, here’s everything I’ve learned the hard way.
Start With the Goal First
This sounds obvious, but most people skip it. Before you even open up your template builder, ask: what is this email supposed to do?
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Welcome a new subscriber?
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Recover an abandoned cart?
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Announce a new product?
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Upsell a customer who just bought?
Each goal demands a different structure. A cart recovery email needs urgency. A welcome email needs trust. If you try to do everything in one email, it ends up doing nothing.
I now map every email to a single goal — no more, no less. That alone helped me cut down on clutter and made my CTAs way more effective.
Nail the Header and Subject Line
Your email could be a masterpiece, but if the subject line sucks, no one’s opening it.
What’s worked best for me?
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Use curiosity: “You left this behind…”
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Add urgency: “Selling fast – grab yours before it’s gone”
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Get personal: “Hey Sarah, need help checking out?”
Then in the header, keep it clean. I use a plain-text headline that matches the subject line — just reinforces the message. If your design gets too fancy here, you lose people right away. Don’t make them scroll to figure out what this is about.
Make the Product the Star
Here’s a mistake I made early on: I buried the product under a giant header image and 4 paragraphs of text. No one even saw it.
Now? Product front and center.
In a cart reminder, I use a thumbnail image, product name, price, and a “Finish Your Purchase” button. That’s it. And it works.
Even in promo emails, I showcase 2–3 products max. Big, clear photos. Short blurbs (like 1–2 lines). And always include direct links to that exact item, not just the homepage.
Keep Your Copy Stupid Simple
I used to write long poetic descriptions. I thought I was building “brand voice.” Truth is, I was confusing people.
Now I follow this rule: if a 7th grader wouldn’t get it, I rewrite it.
Example:
❌ “Elevate your lifestyle with our eco-forward, artisan-crafted carryall.”
✅ “This eco-friendly tote is built to last and carries everything you need.”
You’re not trying to win awards. You’re trying to get clicks.
One Clear CTA (Seriously, Just One)
Here’s something wild: I A/B tested a promo email. One version had three CTA buttons — “Shop Now,” “See the Full Collection,” and “Learn More.” The other had just one — “Grab Yours Now.”
The single CTA version had 26% more clicks. People don’t want choices. They want clarity.
So now every email gets one button, above the fold, and then maybe one more repeated at the bottom. That’s it.
Mobile-First, Always
Over 70% of my opens come from phones. Yours probably too.
Here’s what I learned the hard way:
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Use 1-column layouts. Multi-column emails look terrible on small screens.
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CTA buttons need to be big enough for thumbs (at least 44px tall).
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Keep subject lines short — under 40 characters works best on mobile inboxes.
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Test dark mode. Some emails that look great in light mode become unreadable in dark.
Now I always preview emails on my phone before sending. Always.
Add Trust Signals (Yes, Even in Email)
E-commerce is built on trust. If someone doesn’t know your brand, they’re hesitant. I started adding mini customer reviews under product descriptions, and boom — more clicks.
You can also add:
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Free shipping badges
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“As seen in” logos
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Customer photos or testimonials
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Return policy highlights
Just tuck them at the bottom or below the CTA. Subtle, but powerful.
Bonus Tip: Abandon Pretty for Performance
I once spent hours designing a gorgeous holiday email in Canva, imported it to my ESP, and… it tanked.
Why? Took forever to load. Images didn’t render for half the audience. The call to action was buried under design fluff.
Now my best-performing emails are plain-ish. No background colors. No fancy fonts. Just clean layout, big CTA, sharp copy, and solid visuals.
Looks nice on desktop. Looks better on mobile. And most importantly? It converts.
Final Thought
Designing high-converting e-commerce emails isn’t about being artsy, it’s about being strategic. Know what your customer wants, remove the distractions, and guide them toward the action.
Use simple, responsive design. Lead with value. Make the CTA pop. And test like crazy.
Trust me, once you figure out what works for your audience, email becomes your most profitable channel — hands down.








